Hourai 139 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 (edited) The Azure Mistress is a half water elemental/human/mermaid born from the violent waters of the Azure Shallows, with no feelings of remorse nor pain when killing those who dare to shake the calm waters where she resides. In the Great War of the Spear, Orin's attack to Ayvondil had shaken the land so much, the water was restless for hundreds of days, thus giving form to the Mistress herself. Born with hate towards Forsakens, she is said to swallow Death itself deep in her lake, thus Forsaken people tend to avoid visiting. She has a caring side towards Chosen and Elven tribe for helping her calm the seas and lakes after the Great War of the Spear, she is often seen helping them with her healing magic and infinite knowledge she holds. Till when, though, before they also betray her for the treasures she holds deep down her underwater lair? In an area she is protected by four mermans, each having 10% of Azure Mistress' total HP She is surrounded by them, and attacking one also makes everyone attack you. She heals 1000 every 5 seconds, uses Frostbolt and Forest Song on her enemies. Edited May 20, 2015 by Despair Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourai 139 Posted May 20, 2015 Author Share Posted May 20, 2015 Criticism and comments are welcomed, since I'll only participate via forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 (edited) Great idea, but wouldn't that water thingy expert skill from druids fit better? Seems a bit weird that a water monster uses grass attacks, right? Edited May 20, 2015 by Nosotraes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourai 139 Posted May 20, 2015 Author Share Posted May 20, 2015 (edited) Call it Underwater Lullaby, much like Sirens used to sing songs to attract people in the ships, then eat them. Edited May 20, 2015 by Despair Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hike Tyson 41 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 Its very good! But i think make it look evil! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azebu 92 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 bubbles out of nowhere mouth looks weird string is just what the river behind is not continuous my neck hurts But I like the fire-water synergy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira 1 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 Hehe nice however i agree highly it is absurd to use grass attacks perhaps i will go with a light water stun attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Definitely Not Azebu 13 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 it's shit ayy lmao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hike Tyson 41 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 bubbles out of nowhere mouth looks weird string is just what the river behind is not continuous my neck hurts But I like the fire-water synergy. That's impolite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azebu 92 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 That's impolite That's constructive criticism. I'm an artist myself, and one good objective look at your work is much better than 100 posts of "it's great!!". If everyone tells you you're perfect, then you won't even think you can be better. And you always can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourai 139 Posted May 20, 2015 Author Share Posted May 20, 2015 I know Azebu and his advice indeed was right I didn't get offended, but that was the work of a hour, I might work on details later the week or not at all Its up to the judges if I have to change anything or not... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hike Tyson 41 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 That's constructive criticism. I'm an artist myself, and one good objective look at your work is much better than 100 posts of "it's great!!". If everyone tells you you're perfect, then you won't even think you can be better. And you always can. I admit you're a good critic but on the offense oh well maybe you're right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
klybnyash 28 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 good pic c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgana 780 Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 Nice idea but 1k hp every 5 seconds is a bit too much =O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corona virus 230 Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 How we gonna fight a mermaid? We dont go on watee, they dont go on land. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A male 180 Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 You mean it has life steal , well not bad , but where could it be added ? And also like snowman said , where will the boss be walking, or swimming ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourai 139 Posted May 21, 2015 Author Share Posted May 21, 2015 (edited) 1000 hp per 5 seconds is fine, it was on Sam Hain and nobody complained It doesn't have lifesteal It can be just like a serpent and swish swoosh around you know. Don't forget it's a game... Inspect the images to the right, youll see what I mean.... Edited May 21, 2015 by Despair Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bdsc 41 Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 1000 hp per 5 seconds is fine, it was on Sam Hain and nobody complained It doesn't have lifesteal It can be just like a serpent and swish swoosh around you know. Don't forget it's a game... Inspect the images to the right, youll see what I mean.... Sam hain didn't have a time and many ppl atk it you never see 1pt kill it right "that I'd it's a dung boss" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourai 139 Posted May 21, 2015 Author Share Posted May 21, 2015 The competition is "Create a boss", bosses are out of dungeons too, this isn't certainly a dungeon boss, stop assuming things. This might aswell be a boss like Faceless is, or Spawn, but for the new part of Ayvondil, Azure Shallows, which happens to be underwater too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bdsc 41 Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 The competition is "Create a boss", bosses are out of dungeons too, this isn't certainly a dungeon boss, stop assuming things. This might aswell be a boss like Faceless is, or Spawn, but for the new part of Ayvondil, Azure Shallows, which happens to be underwater too. ik it was supposed to be "If it's a dung boss" but I still think that 1k per 5sec is too much if you add life steal would be reasonable maybe 5%or10% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourai 139 Posted May 21, 2015 Author Share Posted May 21, 2015 Sam Hain has 1000 heal per 5 seconds and 4 party mobs around it with traps and nobody bats an eye I add 1000 heal per 5 seconds to my own boss and everyone loses their mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bdsc 41 Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 Sam Hain has 1000 heal per 5 seconds and 4 party mobs around it with traps and nobody bats an eye I add 1000 heal per 5 seconds to my own boss and everyone loses their mind Sam hain is a quest boss so you will find someone who want to do it and it was event I mean look at Faceless no one farm or Spawn 1000hp each 5sec is challenging but maybe too much for a boss you hardly get a pt for Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourai 139 Posted May 22, 2015 Author Share Posted May 22, 2015 >Implying That's enough for you It's a personal choice really, I wanted to make it tough to kill, the other choices I had was Dark Shield or Counterattack, just be happy Might even revise the skills since we're allowed to make our own whatsoever... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bdsc 41 Posted May 22, 2015 Share Posted May 22, 2015 >Implying That's enough for you It's a personal choice really, I wanted to make it tough to kill, the other choices I had was Dark Shield or Counterattack, just be happy Might even revise the skills since we're allowed to make our own whatsoever... I wasn't trying to be criticism and your right it's personal choice and pls no counter strike Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zarez Vendeta 0 Posted May 22, 2015 Share Posted May 22, 2015 Weew Cool mermaind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maleshaman 15 Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 Ah Got any level of skills she will have perhaps? I'm curious after it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgana 780 Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 Well 1k every 5 seconds is much but challenging for the pt needs good teamwork, I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourai 139 Posted May 24, 2015 Author Share Posted May 24, 2015 Maximum levels 4/4 forest song and frostbolt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fable.gilmore 0 Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Its good to know what the people think about your work, the critics are to make you think in new ideas That's good i think nice mermaid draw Despair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kuzma169 11 Posted May 28, 2015 Share Posted May 28, 2015 It's very many red yourself painted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hourai 139 Posted May 29, 2015 Author Share Posted May 29, 2015 It's not colored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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