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THIS IS D LINK TO MY STORY.....PLZ READ N REVIEW http://forum.warspear-online.com/index.php?topic=89741.0

not sarcasm........ :aggressive: jst slight disbelief. :blush: ... since i never thought anybody would have 16 chap ready :wacko:

this is d link to my story...........kindly read & review http://forum.warspear-online.com/index.php?topic=89741.0

thanx fellow players :) ur reviews r much appreciated :D

you r right :clapping: in my original write up i did :pleasantry: divide the paras so dat d story nd my internal dialogue could be easily distinguished :unknw: alas d character limit was gettin broken by a huge margin....... :nea: so had to shorten it up :mega_shok: anywayz thanks for readin & reviewin :drinks:

wat?!!.! U actually liked it.!.?!!.!!! Thanx :) it's actually my actual experience....this is hw i usually end up in norlant. Either dead, or broken

this is d link to my story...plz read nd try to review!!! I'm trying to build on my writing skills & am in need of constructive suggestions:) http://forum.warspear-online.com/index.php?topic=89741.new#new

this is new to me

this is d link to my story. Plz read nd lemme now wat u think abt it http://forum.warspear-online.com/index.php?topic=89741.new#new

this is my edited version of wat i had originally written. It's 3990 characters long spaces included. Plz read & share ur views abt it :)

Dark mist paraded the swamps as thepitter-patter of rain cascaded to the grass. The sounds would have been soothing if not for the roaring clashesof thunder and lightning. The pitter-patter of small feet drowned the sound of the rain, hurriedly splashing into dirty puddles.My clothes soaked, my bare feet filthyas i ran to the nearest teleporter. Midnight tresses flopped maddeningly against the racing form,but i didn't dare stop. I was sure my feet were bleeding and swollen under my 'broken' treads, but i didn't dare slow. They were close, i could tell. Whichever island i went, they were already there, either hunting or patrolling. I had to keep running; i told my healer i wouldn't stop. If i did, i shivered as a shrill cry of a wyvern was heard, i was dead. Just like my poor party members. The sounds of shouting froze me as i stopped to listen, pinpointing the noise. Through the deafening rain heavy footsteps pounded the earth, and it wasn't just one pair. Quickly, i leapt into a nearby bush, its thick leaves easily hiding my decayed form. I held my damned breath as a group of ten elves entered my vision, their faces partially covered by donned masks or helms. Their shining armorswere damp with sweat & their majestic robes clung mercilessly to their skin as rain pounded down, the blades on their backs, hammers in their iron grip, staves & elaborate bows, all shining dangerously in the partial light. How could this have happened. (Started my day wid a shred of luck, got to kota in a couple of jumps & even reached hydra's lair!!! Thankfullythere were fellow legionaries here so i entered in a party. A simple bait & the hungry beast fell in our trap. Still it was a costly affair. None of the people had repair scrolls so the mightof hydra damaged our weapon & brought mine to near destruction. However much worst happened when many elves arrived & attacked us. They were likely waiting in ambush. With no hope of winning & my weapon broken, i desperately used my threads of darkness & exhalation to stun a druid. Instantly i made a run for the nearest norlant teleporter. However as luck would have it, jst before jumping into the magic vortex a divine energy hit my back, burning away some of my rotten flesh. Though i teleported away but the energy's effect sent me reeling on all fours. When i finally regained my bearings, i found out that a priest had cursed me. It was both lasting & hindering me from using my malevolent powers lest i injure myself more. While i was pondering on wat to do, another bunch of those pesky elves showed up forcing me to leave. I've been running ever since.) Currently i was hiding & the elves were searching for me or some other legionary to kill. I nearly gasped as a Paladin looked sideways, intently watching the bush where i resided. My black heart hammered in my chest (dunno how dats possible) as i held my broken sword in a vice grip. Moments passed, the rain being my only solace before i heard the paladin carry on. I slowly came out before jogging towards where i hoped the teleporter would be. NOT a gud idea. Just wen i saw d teleporter i threw allcaution into the abyss & hurried. Thats wen my bad luck kicked in. Tenmetres away from the recall teleporter & a ranger blocked my path. "shit", cursed. He shot an arrow which i nimbly dodged. Before he could fire a second arrow i pulled him towards me & stuned him. Alas my luck ran out & i accidently grazed a frogl in its arm. Angry & in pain it called forth his kin. I dashed to the portal batting away their harpoons, dodging the arrows of the ranger & running on the slippery ground too. I got multiple slash & stab wounds but i couldn't stop. Wid a final leap i jumped through the portal & to safety. I cried in sheer joy, "Hurra-ack!!!". Looking back i saw an arrow stickingout of my back. Finally Losing all of my strength & collapsed on kota's floor. I could hear healers coming but my body couldn't respond. This was not how i had wanted to spend my day.

oh now i remember....... The guy in d alchemic room right?!!.!

Now I know I added alot of shades and mystries about Gunther's life. Who is this gunther,.?!!.!. Dunno where but i have heard this name b4 :unknw:

lol those lags r a real pain in d rear, :facepalm:

interesting story :) Alas poor bunny........i alwayz kill d bunny nd rats :D

quite d creative mind u got there!!!

wow man awesome story :good:

wtf 16 chapters?!!.! :shok:

lake elemental........my worst nightmare

ur creative mind roxx.... Jay ho :)

bacon spell seems cool man.......:D

lol funny enough for me...:D

wow u made quite a connection there!!!

wat would he do wid 2 rings?!!.!.

nice story....but wat is d chest u were talkin abt?!!.!