teozantyn

Good or bad?

Good or bad?

Good luck to all for judging tomorrow! Thanks for reading and rating my story. It means a lot to me. To those that disliked this story, I take it as an opportunity to improve my story-making skills! So thanks for your feedback.

Really good.

Lol

Bump

Looks like someone isn't paying attention to the rules.

A few mins of life left? Where have I seen that before?

Deserves number 1. Great effort and good job!

The forum moderators said that it should be less than 4000 characters. SHOULD BE. Doesn't mean it can't.

So true

Yay Dota 2!

Many errors. Add some paragraphs please, and can you place a space after each punctuation you use?

Astounding number of grammatical and punctuational mistakes. However storyline is extremely well written.

Is Thor dead? Why isn't he in this story?

Cool! Fortunately you've told me! I'm never swimming in that lake again!

Rules 1. Story's size should be from 1000 characters up to 4000 characters 2. Genre in which stories should be written is limited to the specific game setting - it is assumed that it will be a fantasy in all its forms. 3. You should tell us a story from the view of any game character: monster, miniboss or even quest NPC. You should tell the story about the day of that character, about its life and adventures! 4. You should create thread in special forum section 5. Restrictions. To participate you should have at least 15 messages on forum. 1 user – 1 entry. For 1, I have exactly 4000 characters, including spaces, after cutting down a couple paragraphs. For 2, it is fantasy, as it includes Elves and snakes talking. For 3, I told a story about the day of the character. Since which day wasn't specified, I wrote about the past of this character. For 4, done. For 5, done. From my perspective, this is a legit entry to the competition, and hopefully no one rejects it.

Can I have a story that is a little above 4000 characters?

Thanks! Your story was amazing, probably even better than mine!

How can Jonny be so stupid? Taking wrong ships twice? Lol

It's too short, better rewrite it!

It is. It only looks long. :D

You've repeated a paragraph 3 times... Try again.

Due to the revamp, character count has been increased to about 3000.

Honestly, there are worst. Don't flame please. Keep this a place of happiness, joy, and peace.