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Hero from Nowhere III

Hero from Nowhere III (6/27)

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  1. Good luck to all for judging tomorrow! Thanks for reading and rating my story. It means a lot to me. To those that disliked this story, I take it as an opportunity to improve my story-making skills! So thanks for your feedback.
  2. A few mins of life left? Where have I seen that before?
  3. Deserves number 1. Great effort and good job!
  4. The forum moderators said that it should be less than 4000 characters. SHOULD BE. Doesn't mean it can't.
  5. Many errors. Add some paragraphs please, and can you place a space after each punctuation you use?
  6. Astounding number of grammatical and punctuational mistakes. However storyline is extremely well written.
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