antim 0 Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 Once upon a time there was a land called Arinar . Creatures used to be the rulers of these lands but, once the time went by, humans started appearing. They came by boat over the ocean,destroying everything in their path and building cities and castles.They were merciless , soon starting a war . The animals where caught in the middle , being hunted down and killed by these humans. Marashka was one of the first creatures to appear in Arinar. She was the ruler of all panthers and she was the only creature that humans couldn't kill. One day, one of Marashka`s panthers gave out the alarm. "The humans are coming" she shouted Then, suddenly Marashka saw them. There were three humans coming toward her and slicing all the panthers that tried to oppose . "There she is! We must kill her once and for all!" Said one of the warriors. Marashka gave out a terrifying roar and she rushed to them . She felt pain, anger and was soon tired but she didn't quit. After a breathtaking battle three corpses were laying at her feet. A few hours later Marashka was awaken by the sounds outside her den. As she exited she saw her panthers trying to defeat the five warriors who were searching to kill her. One of the humans died but all of her panthers were dead. She jumped at the nearest human and the battle began. After hours of fighting, only one human was left. Marashka knew him very well..... He was one of the humans bravest warrior. They looked at each other for some time ...and... then , the enemy strikes her! She fell to the ground , her view going black ..... Her life flashing in front of her eyes. She saw her childhood, the day she was promoted leader of all panther, the day she met the wolfs leader, Fang. She remembered how the humans came and captured him. He fought for his freedom but in vane... They put him on a big boat and took him to faraway lands . Seeing Fangs face made her strong. With an incredible determination she grabbed the enemy by the neck and threw him on the ground.She was victorious once again ....... As she closed her eyes and sighed of relief a powerful pain was felt in the neck. While looking down she saw how the human with his last forces hit her with his knife. Marashka felt hot and fell to the ground. She looked up to the sky, hearing Fang's voice in her head , how he used to motivate and encourage her using words filled with love. She closed her eyes , frankly smiling. Such a bad time to smile but she did it. In her last moments of life she thought how unfair it all is ..... How it is to be hunted down..... And with a last sigh, the panther put her head on her paws. There she laid.... At last defeated , but free ..... Finding the end with a smile..... Well this was the end!! The end of the panthers greatest ruler ..... MARASHKA Haha I hope u like it guys ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 14, 2013 Author Share Posted July 14, 2013 May we up this guys? :rofl: :rofl: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR X 2 Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 maraksha is famale :bad: ?? how can you know?? :bad: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maleshaman 15 Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 maraksha is famale :bad: ?? how can you know?? :bad: By looking between her legs when she`s dead. Good story :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 14, 2013 Author Share Posted July 14, 2013 Ty male shaman ;D ;D And soldier marshka not name of a boy :bad: and panthers ussualy take u to girls :wacko: :facepalm: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xbabaroix 3 Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 miss marakhsha ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR X 2 Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 By looking between her legs when she`s dead. Good story :D ever you do with marak :bad: ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maleshaman 15 Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 Hey, I`m not an elf so it`s not my boss. Besides nothing wrong with looking lmao. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megadethbr 3 Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 By looking between her legs when she`s dead. Good story :D :lol: :lol: :lol: best answer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR X 2 Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 i see in ur story, maraskha, not maraksha :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teozantyn 0 Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 Well, nice descriptive words used! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 16, 2013 Author Share Posted July 16, 2013 TY very much guys :drinks: :drinks: . soldier please drop it :facepalm: :facepalm: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 16, 2013 Author Share Posted July 16, 2013 If you guys see any strange words its typing mistake 8) 8) . just ask me and ill say real meaning :good: :good: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 17, 2013 Author Share Posted July 17, 2013 I want see winners earlierrrrrrrr :lol: :lol: :lol: 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cursedlord 0 Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Nice :yahoo: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 21, 2013 Author Share Posted July 21, 2013 Ty soooo much curselorddd :drinks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
200000000 volt amaru 1 Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 quite d creative mind u got there!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 24, 2013 Author Share Posted July 24, 2013 quite d creative mind u got there!!! Ty bro yes im pretty creative 8) 8) ;D ;D ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 25, 2013 Author Share Posted July 25, 2013 hey guys anyone know hot to count characters ? :facepalm: :facepalm: Thank you :drinks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNP 1 Posted July 25, 2013 Share Posted July 25, 2013 hey guys anyone know hot to count characters ? :facepalm: :facepalm: Thank you :drinks: 2,798 with spaces. You can thank me by reading my story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 26, 2013 Author Share Posted July 26, 2013 2,798 with spaces. You can thank me by reading my story. thank a lot bro :drinks: :drinks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antim 0 Posted July 28, 2013 Author Share Posted July 28, 2013 2,798 with spaces. You can thank me by reading my story. Read your story ;D ;D ;D cool bro lets get a prizeeeeee :give_rose: :drinks: :drinks: :drinks: :drinks: :drinks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiffanyluv 0 Posted July 28, 2013 Share Posted July 28, 2013 Nice story :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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