Fawlks 0 Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 Hello, my name is Alexander Corvinus, i am a Death Dealer, also knew as a Vampire. My father, Earl Shtrug, is our lord, and i respect him a lot. However, he cant even know my relationship with my lover, Selena. Cause she's family and mine are enemies. So, we decided keep our love hidden. One night, in my way to find my love, i found something smelling well, and yes, it was blood, fresh blood. I ran fastest as possible to that delicious taste, and it was there! In midle of the bridge. A cup full of blood! Didnt i know, it was a humans trap, when i tryed drink it, 4 vampire hunters came fast, and atacked me! I was almost giving up the fight, when i remembered my love, Selena, and she gave me strong enought to atack back and run away from there. I just reach home when i knew, by a friend, that Selena's father was planning marry him with one of his lords, sir Lucio. I couldnt believe it, my sweet love was promissed to marru with other, i couldnt allow it! In that same night i talked with Selena and we decided left our lifes in name of our love. Then, we rode my horse, Phaton of the Night, and went in search of a new life... @edit Finished, comments ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azebu 92 Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 I don't think that's how we are supposed to do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skiney 1 Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 This is me reading the story: :) ;D :good: :shok: :search: :unknw: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR X 2 Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 dev. said 4000 charachter ;D , ur charachter less than 4000 ;D , i hope u can add story again :clapping: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fawlks 0 Posted July 10, 2013 Author Share Posted July 10, 2013 dev. said 4000 charachter ;D , ur charachter less than 4000 ;D , i hope u can add story again :clapping: Ill soon@edit Devs says MAX is 4000, not min... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR X 2 Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 Ill soon @edit Devs says MAX is 4000, not min... o ya, sorry xd, ;D i think min Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokkka 2 Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 ;D :clapping: ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crossfit 4 Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 sorry but youre wrong , read first the rules , if you follow rules or not this story still being really a shit sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teozantyn 0 Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 It's too short, better rewrite it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimimaro100 0 Posted July 28, 2013 Share Posted July 28, 2013 just revised the story... and it will be validate in the contest. by the way you mind check my story as well? http://forum.warspear-online.com/index.php?topic=89424.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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