pembasmi32 1 Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 THE SEA MONSTER once upon time, adventurer from mountain clan first come in irselnot with troops the leader name reric they come with big ship and many troops. after they come, reric the leader explore every,island,cave and spooky place in irselnot reric find many monster and treasure in irselnot. after know this place good reric bring more troops and make camp in irselnot name armor cliff someday, reric find secret cave in island called leeward island. reric see many bandit there not think long reric bring troops to leeward island and there was fighting. suddenly in the middle of a war going on sound creepy from inside cave come. they stop the war and afraid finally the bandit and reric troops check to the cave together with fell afraid they walk very slowly and carefully they prepared weapon and ready for kill all ';...;' and they jump to see, suddenly they just find little slime they laugh loud and from dark side something big come wooff... 100 troop all die there 1 troops alive and tell to reric reric confused and always think about the monster someday a brave man name inglov come he bring hes elite army and try slay the monster. they run fast with elite weapon come cave and throwing bomb BOOMB.... the monster come out from the lair inglov the rogue have magic and use..... fierce fight in cave 5 elite troops die now only the monster and inglov inglov run out cave and not report to reric. finally inglov make camp and waiting a new hero and give quest to kill the monster no one cant kill the monster and inglov have waiting 2 years in leeward island. and thats the legend of strong monster in arinar for the new hero hope can kill the monster and irslelnot become peacefulthe end sorry im still newbie i hv bad english too :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teozantyn 0 Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 Try to improve on your plot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembasmi32 1 Posted July 16, 2013 Author Share Posted July 16, 2013 Try to improve on your plot. mean ?? srri idk anything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pummywarlord 3 Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 nice one,pemm. Like ur lake monster :bad: Half crocodile and half man ;D . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijan 0 Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 :drinks: :drinks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xbabaroix 3 Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 i already killed sea monster ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calaquendi 8 Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 bagus ceritanya, keep spirit pembasmi :drinks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembasmi32 1 Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 thx all :sorry: srry still bad im still new huhuhuu :cray: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
calaquendi 8 Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Im new too :cray: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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