poetry

[graybeardx 17]

i was wondering if there are any poets in forum... I tried to write these 2 poems but i guess they suck hard English is my second language so my vocabulary isnt very good and i guess i dont have the heart of a poet. But here it goes, i had written these to the girl i love.

 

i didnt understand what happened,

Tears from my eyes going down.

i didnt know how painful it was,

now that i have fallen in love.

 

from the day i met you,

I had nothing to complain,

but that we are next to each other,

and our hearts miles away.

 

You became everything i have

anything i can think of, all i ever want

now in a single day i would fall apart

without your smile on my mind.

without your love in my heart.

 

from the first time i saw you,

a spark started in my heart.

now your love is what keeps me alive,

and what burns me in the night.

 

xxxxxxxx

 

when i saw you for the first time,

my body just shook.

when i saw your smile for the first time,

it was the only thing i could look.

 

when our eyes met for the first time,

everything else turned to gray.

When i talked to you for the first time ,

you took my breath away.

 

when i come around you

my chest becomes a cage to my heart

when i see you walk away

my body shivers and falls apart

 

as you are reading these words,

my love for you gets stronger.

and as long as you are happy ,

i will love you

for eternity...

[Nosotraes 350]

I thought we already had a topic like this, but I just remembered that that was some weird shit in the Guess who will post next thread...

[Ninja Owl 210]

Here's a haiku I use to pick up chicks on the Internet:

 

Appealing odor

Rolling in hairy armpits

A deodorant

[fkum777 37]

 

Here's a haiku I use to pick up chicks on the Internet:

 

Appealing odor

Rolling in hairy armpits

A deodorant

 

 

Never seen beautiful verse like this, so deep.... so meaningful.....my feeling .....

[graybeardx 17]

 

Here's a haiku I use to pick up chicks on the Internet:

 

Appealing odor

Rolling in hairy armpits

A deodorant

ddue thats.. just.. *trys not to cry* *crys a lot*

[Corona virus 230]

Be it not for action, we all perish.

Words don't fix the problems on this planet.

But when people act and try for their wish,

We can triumph and we will not submit.