Pliskin 41 Posted March 29, 2015 Author Share Posted March 29, 2015 I'm not your poet, and you know it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Snake 70 Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 I'm not your muse, don't dream about Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCocktail 183 Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 Im not your master, you cant learn it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Snake 70 Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 I'm not your carnivore, don't be afraid herbivore Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ihtehotdogx 6 Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 (edited) I'm not your buttbuddy,gayboy Edited March 29, 2015 by Hotdog#1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 I'm not your gayboy, fly like a bird in the sky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCocktail 183 Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 I wont fly like a bird in the sky, dive like a duck (instead)! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 Oh! Dive like a duck and fly in the sky like a dragon. I'm not your dragon, square root. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pliskin 41 Posted March 30, 2015 Author Share Posted March 30, 2015 His eyes are ablaze , see the madman in his gaze ,Fly , on your way like an EAGLE! Fly as high as the sun. I'm not your square root, hypotenuse Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 And crash to the earth back again. I'm not your hypotenuse, Iron Maiden. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turtle 198 Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Run to The hills Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Run to The hills And climb the mountains Turtle 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ihtehotdogx 6 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 And climb the mountains To the top and fly through the sky to pierce the heavens! Turtle 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 To the top and fly through the sky to pierce the heavens!And touch the stars Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigsaw-PZ 107 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 This is not poetry, this is lies! I want my money back. - Climbing mountains takes skill and experience. - Humans cant fly. You will die. - The ozone layer is not a bubble, it cannot be pierced. - A star is a burning ball of energy with unimaginable heat, you will disintegrate into nothingness 1000s of miles before you can touch said star. kidnap Richard Branson, steal his rockets, fly to the sun and go out in a blaze of glory. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 This is not poetry, this is lies! I want my money back. - Climbing mountains takes skill and experience. - Humans cant fly. You will die. - The ozone layer is not a bubble, it cannot be pierced. - A star is a burning ball of energy with unimaginable heat, you will disintegrate into nothingness 1000s of miles before you can touch said star. kidnap Richard Branson, steal his rockets, fly to the sun and go out in a blaze of glory. ... This guy ruined our... Our... Argh! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigsaw-PZ 107 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 I saved you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 I saved you! But you ruined the poetry>_> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigsaw-PZ 107 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 I improved it, what is poetry without reality. Imagine a war without brutality. Without it we feel cheated. The truth is needed. I made my own interpretation of what your poetry meant, have i succeed? If it isn't about flying into the sun. What was the meaning being your rhyme? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 If it isn't about flying into the sun. What was the meaning being your rhyme? It... It was just beautiful Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigsaw-PZ 107 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, my young padawan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosotraes 350 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, my young padawan I'm a sith. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigsaw-PZ 107 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 o really..... Then what is the code of the sith? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCocktail 183 Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 Try 12345 or the birthday of lord sidious. Roses are red, Violets are blue, Does this count as poetry too? I know you feel fooled, because i allready said that puny poet, so please stay cooled (?) I try some rhymes but none is my dime what should i do with me as a foo' .. Turtle 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pliskin 41 Posted April 2, 2015 Author Share Posted April 2, 2015 (edited) Those bars you yack hit a major chord, i'm gunna stack lines till its a hoard. I need a bit of self guidence to get past this phase. I keep hurtin myself like its the end of days. But maybe because im stuck in tunnel vision. The world aint quite what im wishin, but i can end it like i was fishin. I dont know what to do but im confident ill stay true, to myself and my family. Tryin not to cause a calamity, but its in my actions i find the fallacy, am i just a selfish brat? Or is it compassion that i lack. I sure do feel sincere when i reveal what i hold dear. But maybe its cause its so explosive or the words drip corrosive. Im lookin to the boondocks and the door behind me soon locks. I find out when i take a step back that im about to crack. But i hold on for the ones who need me most. Id rather be a host than a ghost. No need to fear the reaper but these feelings come like a creeper. Gunna blow up these brick walls like minecraft, id be damned if i need a life raft, need to remember to stop and laugh before its too late and im left with crap. Bout your lines i could comeback each time but it might not be worth a dime. Dreamin while im walkin, sleepin when im talkin, awake when im stalkin. Not much here but a jungle mix, see the wall as it falls and not pickin up any bricks My brother and i send poem raps to each other daily. Thats one i sent today i will post more later Edited April 2, 2015 by ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jswaaz 87 Posted April 2, 2015 Share Posted April 2, 2015 roses are dead violets are dead i am a bad gardener Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pliskin 41 Posted April 2, 2015 Author Share Posted April 2, 2015 Roses are red Violets are red Trees are red I set your garden on fire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jswaaz 87 Posted April 2, 2015 Share Posted April 2, 2015 Roses are red Violets are red Trees are red I set your garden on fire now it all makes sense! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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