Maleshaman 15 Posted August 2, 2013 Share Posted August 2, 2013 Enjoy reading, more parts will follow. "My brother and I have done well to control all these fools muhaha... Ah, It is I the great Oko-Shaar telling my story of complete victory" It all started when me and my brother were created by our master Beranigma. He studied upon the stars to learn there hypnotizing powers and learned there true hidden power. When he finally realised that he couldn`t posses this power himself, he started to kill innocent Mountain and Elven people. He collected there brains for the mental powers and casted some ancient combining spell to make a giant brain. That`s how me and my brother have been created. Our master was nice, but his studies made us think of what we could achieve if we "borrowed" it from master, gnegne... Brother and I came to the conclussion to kill master in his sleep and to steal his studies and absorb power. Our body`s began to develope a huge eye, also known as the "All seeing" "Brother, this eye.. It`s wonderfull! I can see the whole world and it`s inhabitants!" With the powers we had and the hypnotizing powers, we`ve decided to control some slaves to build us a home. Yes.. a home, filled with the powers of the cosmic. Once it`s finished we shall name it "the Astral labyrinth" Our home was finished we moved in deeply, as deep as we could go. Brother contacts me with messages of "guests" Guests? in our home? Hahaha I see them! It`s a group of Mountain people, I spoke to brother and told him: "Let them pass brother, I wish to know what business they have here muhaha... The group of Mountain people finally arrived at brothers lair. Judging by the looks of there facial expressions I could tell fear was growing when they saw brother, except for one of them. His eyes were as yellow as fire, his staff was glowing brightly and his cloths were remarkable thorned. He seems wounded, but strong willed and full of power. The group of Mountain people spoke to brother: "We came here upon a request of Beranger, where can we find a creature called 'Oko-Shaar'?" Brother answerd: "What business do you have with him?" Mountain people:"Beranger commanded us to execute one of his creations, now tell us where he is!" Khazh-Maar:"Ah master`s spirit commanded you to execute Brother? Muhahaha! I`m afraid I can let that happen! Minions, attack these filthy Mountain people!" Mountain people:"Men, Arm yourself! Murder all of them!" I watched the Mountain people fight back to back in Brothers lair. They were doing well, all minions were dead. Brother decided to put a end to it, he flooted toward a warrior wielding 2swords and used his power to blow him into pieces. Truely enjoying to see Brother`s power haha.. The Mountain people looked even more anxious. "Why isn`t that shaman showing any slightest sign of fear?" I asked myself. The mountain people decided to execute brother. The shamans start calling the spirits to aid them, giving them supreme healing abilities. The barbarian let a giant roar causing several minions to run away. "cowards" I said. The mountain people fought Brother, there power was enormous, to great for brother I would say. In the end brother`s shape began to glow, "brother, what are you doing?" Brother replied: "You`ll see, preare yourself. They came for you" I saw brother exploding, "why brother.... WHY!!!" My colour is changing, I`m bright red now. "what`s happening to me! AAAARRRGHHHH!" I felt like I was on fire, could it be... ha..haha..Muhahaha! Yes it is Finally! I looked upon the entrance to my lair, and I saw him. The shaman, I spoke to him "You came for me didn`t you?" He nodded, did he lose his tongue? I asked him: "It`s rude to enter someone house and not introducing yourself, tell me who are you?" He spoke to me in a calm way: "My name is Maleshaman, My task is to put an end to your mind control and to destroy this 'home' of yours" I replied:"If that`s the case then let`s get started, minions ATTACK!" My minions ran towards him, and he just stood there looking around him... what is he going to do?... Suddenly I felt a tremendous power coming from him, was he controlling something? ....!"minions, look out! The floor is collapsing!" It was to late, an earthquake caused the floor to disapear with my minions... What am I gonna do! The shaman walked slowly towards me. "How in the name of the Spear did he do that?!" "Don`t come any closer! I`m warning you!" He simpely ignored my words. "Alright then, you leave me no choice!" I casted my dark magic and hit him pretty good, unfortinately it didn`t seem to do much. "Damned, He`s really strong" He walks closer to me and his Scepter began glowing heavily, I feel an tremendous power going from his body to his scepter. Before I knew he set off an earthquake, causing the ceiling to collapse right onto me. "U...u..ugh... who ever..you are... You`ll never.. kill..me argh... He looked down on me and put his hand on my eye, then he laughed and said: "Muhahaha, look at you Oko-Shaar, You think you can defeat me in your current state?" He`s right... I couldn`t possibly defeat him. Unless.... He spoke to me: "You kno my name right? Do you kno where I come from? Well do you? no? let me tell you where this body came from" That body came from? What`s he talking about. The shaman took of his costume and showed me his face. "this body once belonged to someone, untill Master beranger murderd him, he made me from the spirits of 100shamans,rogues and barbarians. I was suppose to be his strongest creation, untill he created you and Khaz-Maar" I replied to him:"so your a creation of Beranger aswell? Why do we not kno you then?" He replied: "I left Master to join the Mountain clans to fight off elfs, in meanwhile I never heard from master till shortly. You and your brother murderd master in his sleep, therefor judgement is coming. Now close your eye." I felt an tremendous power coming again, was this it? am I going to die? no! Suddenly I could move my tentacle again and I grabbed the shamans throath. I spoke to him "You fool, You killed my brother, and you expect me to die aswell!? Take this you fool!" I ate his body to absorb any piece of power he has. It was over.. finally I could rest again. "Ugh, I feel like having a bad acid.. wait.. My body, it..s.. glowing!? No! It can not be!" Suddenly I saw a scepter sticking out of my body pointing at my eye. The light was even brighter then the sun! and before I knew I felt like I was blown away... or better said like I was dead. Maleshaman:"Coward, trying to choke and to absorb my power. I have no mercy for you, now begone.. EARTHQUAKE!" The whole Astral Labyrinth started to tremble and collapse. Maleshaman:" My task is completed, I shall return to master" Part 1 end. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defi 1 Posted August 2, 2013 Share Posted August 2, 2013 Nice to see I'm not the only one that's carrying on with a series. Good story! :clapping: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maleshaman 15 Posted August 2, 2013 Author Share Posted August 2, 2013 Part 2. This place was soon to be nothing more but a ruined pile of rocks, I had to make a fast escape, but before I do that I must seek my other Mountain clan people. I enterd the other lair in hope to see a glimpse of there weaponery shining bright, but it was unfortunate... As I came closer I realised what the battle had cost, Piles of corpses were scatterd all over the floor, bloodstains filled the lair and the smell of burned flesh pierced my nose. "Why did this had to happen.... just WHY!... Beranger better stored there spirits otherwise the old fool will have a life full of agony and pain..." The fastest way I could possible think of was jumping down the dark holes, as this Labyrinth was build in levels. We passed several bosses that we had to slay in order to get to Oko-shaars lair. Before I go I'll take the fallen there weapons and amulet to show to there wifes..not an easy task that's for sure. Our Mountain clan woman are known to be even more frightening then any demon that walks over our lands.. But I had to do it, it's for the sake of my fallen comrades. I put there weapons in my bag, several small axes, several big axes and several swords and staves... "right, now it's time to go back to the lands of Arinar" I mutterd to myself. Facing the pitch black holes around me I had second toughts about jumping in, but there wasn't a faster way, the exit is blocked with huge pillars and other rumble. I had to decide quickly and since I had 1option I had to take it. I jumped down the hole and felt like my stomach was being pushed out of my troath, surely I fell down for 5mins, facing nothing but pitch black around me... Suddenly I heard footsteps as I was falling down. "footsteps? this can't be possible, no other Mc has dared to enter here, and I've never seen any filty elf passing trough here." I really couldn't think of who would enter here, but I was going to find out sooner then I tought. Ground was coming near, Hopefully it'll be a soft landing! Light started busting out of no-where and I could see the ground coming closer and closer very fast, before I knew I aimed my staff to the ground in order to perform a blast hoping the shockwave will cause my landing to be perfect. I started concetrating and unleashed my Ball Lightening directly to the floor, It was a succesfull cast with tremendous shockwaves. I landed on my feet and inmediatly sharpend my sight around me, someone was here, but who!? "If anyone is here, reveal yourself at once or fear the consiquonces! SHOW YOURSELF!" I heard rumbeling and before I knew I had a visual on the prey, It was a..... Stay tuned for part 3! What has Maleshaman seen? What will happen? find out on the next part of The curse of Labyrinth! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maleshaman 15 Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 So.. None is interested in stories anymore? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defi 1 Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 I've been reading :yahoo: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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#1 Pro Ranger 0 Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 Warspear is my life Q.Q duck u then ;D u must die by terrorists :rofl: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defi 1 Posted August 8, 2013 Share Posted August 8, 2013 Ah, a fan! Do you want my autograph? :blush: Im not that interested :facepalm: :rofl: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cereal Killer 3 Posted August 9, 2013 Share Posted August 9, 2013 Wonderful! As always, a pleasure reading your story! :give_rose: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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