[[[[JAW]]]] 3 Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 Odin has ordered his son's to take back THOR HAMMER who was stolen by ''the king of darkness oko-shaar'', Deoxyz started the journey with 4 friends, Wtfllllll, Analyze, Sunplex, Andreww, to take his father's hammer thats has been stolen by the Oko-shaar ... After a long journey, they arrived at Maze ( King Of Darkness Oko-shaar Place). Wait Deoxyz!! Not as easy as it was we beat oko shaar, said Wtflllll True, we have to beat the keepers of this maze first, said Sunplex Hey little children!!! for what you dare go into our nest! Herald , Scorpion, Chief Executor says (first floor of the headquarters of the king's guard darkness Oko-shaar) Who are you, and we are not children, we are ODIN SON'S!!! :diablo: Deoxyz was immediately attacked them because of upset, Oh my god!! Deoxyz this nature, grumpy, let's fight them, said Analyze with a flash, Herald,Scorpion & Chief Executor fallen ARROGANT ;D Look at you with our, u guys are easy to beat, said Deoxyz Come on Bro, let us go up to the second floor ,leave that noob guard, said Andreww :clapping: Arriving on the second floor, I heard a commotion downstairs, so that you guys act? :( Alien said. who else if not us? :crazy: Dhoaaarrr!!!!! :mega_shok: Alien instantly dead with Analyze Arrow. Is this the people feared ? very weak! Analyze word :facepalm: -__-)'' You're just the same as deoxyz cocky bro. :facepalm: Come up !!! :wacko: Sunplex said, WOOOOOOOTTT!!!! Sfffffxx! Sunplex into stone, stiff helpless!! Hahaha, :lol: you can not beat Odin F*CKING CHILDREN!! Medusa said Damn, did you do with friends my fri .... ..,,, Andreww could not say anythink again after into stone. Wtfllll began chanting and restore Sunplex and Andreww as before but to no avail, unexpected :pleasantry: analyze jump and stab the head of Medusa with his arrow U ALL ARE WEAK BRO!! :blush: Damn analyze, he kills almost all ;D Sunplex said. -__-)'' Oko-Shaar is mine, :diablo: says Deoxyz OK BOSS!! Said all his friends :good: NAH!!! When they reached the gate Oko-Shaar Hey damn, Thor HAMMER up and restore Mine said Deoxyz Ohh Children of my eternal enemies ,come, the sons of Odin Allfather, Come here and try to beat me, said oko-shaar Deoxyz : Friends please give me your power! Deoxyz Brothers : OK Boss :give_rose: After that, put out the flames of fire mingled Deoxyz lightning. and he began to attack the Oko-Shaar Zooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! Hands and face bruised after shaar oko-hit, Deoxyz proceed with lightning blow to the crown of oko-shaar. Oko-shaar : DAMMIT U LITTLE Bastards!!! :diablo: Oko shaar began spewing a lot of blood, lying on the floor and helpless and eventually explode. DHOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!! Oko-shaar Vanish among a collection of his corpse fumes , THOR HAMMER shows up with figurative lightning yellow glow around the hammer. WOOOTTTT!!! here's mine, Let's go home guys. :dirol: Arriving home, Deoxyz : FATHER!!! We managed to beat the Oko-Shaar. :yahoo: Odin : You're a great kid :give_rose: Analyze : I killed many guards oko-shaar, father :diablo: Wtflll : Analyz just luck alone, father :( Andreww : Analyz indeed powerful and arrogant, dad :blush: Sunplex : these guys can not get along :wacko: Odin : Alright kids, THOR HAMMER is back and i am as ODIN ALLFATHER will inherit the throne of the kingdom to the eldest brother you DEOXYZ with this THOR HAMMER now we are a peaceful country. :give_rose: Although designated Deoxyz who have inherited the throne Odin, the brothers they were still considered as a brother, not call him the King / heir to the Throne of the Kingdom ;D It's long and arduous journey, but the fruit of a satisfactory outcome :) (So Sorry For my Bad ENGLISH :) ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teozantyn 0 Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 Is Thor dead? Why isn't he in this story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[[[[JAW]]]] 3 Posted July 20, 2013 Author Share Posted July 20, 2013 Is Thor dead? Why isn't he in this story? sorry ;D i am as Thor here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR X 2 Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 why not zeus or ares? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xbabaroix 3 Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[[[[JAW]]]] 3 Posted July 21, 2013 Author Share Posted July 21, 2013 why not zeus or ares? zeus is different story with Odin ...cause as i know , odin is all father of the god Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G4ransi 9Bulan 0 Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 ga ngerti artinya :facepalm: :facepalm: :'( :'( :'( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[[[[JAW]]]] 3 Posted July 21, 2013 Author Share Posted July 21, 2013 ga ngerti artinya :facepalm: :facepalm: :'( :'( :'( ;D ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shubhs 0 Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 I thought genre was a day in monster life, u need to have a look through monster, NPC smthing. Dont we....??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR X 2 Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 but in marvel story, zeus can beat odin :'( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pummywarlord 3 Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 I thought genre was a day in monster life, u need to have a look through monster, NPC smthing. Dont we....??? Yes shubie ur right. Rules 3. You should tell us a story from the view of any game character: monster, miniboss or even quest NPC. You should tell the story about the day of that character, about its life and adventures! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[[[[JAW]]]] 3 Posted July 22, 2013 Author Share Posted July 22, 2013 i just join contest for fun ;D i'm nt wish to be a winner , ''just make a story'' :pleasantry: then sorry if my story isn't appropriate with ''contest rule'' :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
200000000 volt amaru 1 Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 wow man awesome story :good: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[[[[JAW]]]] 3 Posted July 23, 2013 Author Share Posted July 23, 2013 wow man awesome story :good: what the ...is that ur face ? :shok: oh nvm .... thanks ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shubhs 0 Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 i just join contest for fun ;D i'm nt wish to be a winner , ''just make a story'' :pleasantry: then sorry if my story isn't appropriate with ''contest rule'' :) Nah bro its not bad story, its nice. I enjoyed reading it :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
200000000 volt amaru 1 Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 this is a link to my own story,,......plz read :) http://forum.warspear-online.com/index.php?topic=89741.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[[[[JAW]]]] 3 Posted July 24, 2013 Author Share Posted July 24, 2013 this is a link to my own story,,......plz read :) http://forum.warspear-online.com/index.php?topic=89741.0 already :give_rose: its awesome story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
200000000 volt amaru 1 Posted July 27, 2013 Share Posted July 27, 2013 Tanx glad u liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[[[[JAW]]]] 3 Posted July 27, 2013 Author Share Posted July 27, 2013 Tanx glad u liked it sure :give_rose: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[[[[JAW]]]] 3 Posted July 28, 2013 Author Share Posted July 28, 2013 Nah bro its not bad story, its nice. I enjoyed reading it :) . thank you very much ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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