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"My brother and I have done well to control all these fools muhaha.. Ah, It is I the great Oko-Shaar telling my story of complete victory"


The group of Mountain people finally arrived at brothers lair. Judging by the looks of there facial expressions I could tell fear was growing when they saw brother, except for one of them. His eyes were as yellow as fire, his staff was glowing brightly and his cloths were remarkable thorned. He seems wounded, but strong willed and full of power.

The group of Mountain people spoke to brother: "We came here upon a request of Beranger, where can we find a creature called 'Oko-Shaar'?"

Brother answerd: "What business do you have with him?"

Mountain people:"Beranger commanded us to execute one of his creations, now tell us where he is!"

Khazh-Maar:"Ah master`s spirit commanded you to execute Brother? Muhahaha! I`m afraid I can let that happen! Minions, attack these filthy Mountain people!"

Mountain people:"Men, Arm yourself! Murder all of them!"


I watched the Mountain people fight back to back in Brothers lair. They were doing well, all minions were dead. Brother decided to put a end to it, he flooted toward a warrior wielding 2swords and used his power to blow him into pieces. Truely enjoying to see Brother`s power haha.. The Mountain people looked even more anxious.

"Why isn`t that shaman showing any slightest sign of fear?" I asked myself.

The mountain people decided to execute brother. The shamans start calling the spirits to aid them, giving them supreme healing abilities. The barbarian let a giant roar causing several minions to run away. "cowards" I said.

The mountain people fought Brother, there power was enormous, to great for brother I would say.

In the end brother`s shape began to glow, "brother, what are you doing?"

Brother replied: "You`ll see, preare yourself. They came for you"

I saw brother exploding, "why brother.. WHY!!!"


I looked upon the entrance to my lair, and I saw him. The shaman, I spoke to him "You came for me didn`t you?"

He nodded, did he lose his tongue?

I asked him: "It`s rude to enter someone house and not introducing yourself, tell me who are you?"

He spoke to me in a calm way: "My name is Maleshaman, My task is to put an end to your mind control and to destroy this 'home' of yours"

I replied:"If that`s the case then let`s get started, minions ATTACK!"

My minions ran towards him, and he just stood there looking around him.. what is he going to do?...

Suddenly I felt a tremendous power coming from him, was he controlling something? ..!"minions, look out! The floor is collapsing!"

It was to late, an earthquake caused the floor to disapear with my minions.. What am I gonna do!

The shaman walked slowly towards me. "How in the name of the Spear did he do that?!"


"Don`t come any closer! I`m warning you!" He simpely ignored my words. "Alright then, you leave me no choice!"

I casted my dark magic and hit him pretty good, unfortinately it didn`t seem to do much.

"Damned, He`s really strong" He walks closer to me and his Scepter began glowing heavily, I feel an tremendous power going from his body to his scepter. Before I knew he set off an earthquake, causing the ceiling to collapse right onto me.

"U...u..ugh... who ever..you are... You`ll never.. kill..me argh...


He looked down on me and put his hand on my eye, then he laughed and said: "Muhaha, look at you Oko-Shaar, You think you can defeat me in your current state?"

He`s right.. I couldn`t possibly defeat him. Unless..


He spoke to me: "You kno my name right? Do you kno where I come from? Well do you? No? let me tell you where this body came from"

That body came from? What`s he talking about.

The shaman took of his costume and showed me his face.

"this body once belonged to someone, untill Master beranger murderd him, he made me from the spirits of 100shamans,rogues and barbarians. I was suppose to be his strongest creation, untill he created you and Khaz-Maar"

I replied to him:"so your a creation of Beranger aswell? Why do we not kno you then?"

He replied: "I left Master to join the Mountain clans to fight off elfs, in meanwhile I never heard from master till shortly. You and your brother murderd master in his sleep, therefor judgement is coming. Now close your eye."


I felt an tremendous power coming again, was this it? am I going to die? no!

Suddenly I could move my tentacle again and I grabbed the shamans throath.

I spoke to him "You fool, You killed my brother, and you expect me to die aswell!? Take this you fool!"

I ate his body to absorb any piece of power he has.

It was over.. finally I could rest again.

"Ugh, I feel like having a bad acid.. wait.. My body, it..s.. glowing!?

No! It can not be!"

Suddenly I saw a scepter sticking out of my body pointing at my eye. The light was even brighter then the sun! and before I knew I felt like I was blown away... or better said like I was dead.


Maleshaman:"Coward, trying to choke and to absorb my power. I have no mercy for you, now begone.. EARTHQUAKE!"


The whole Astral Labyrinth started to tremble and collapse.

Maleshaman:" My task is completed, I shall return to master"


The end.

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Thnx everyone for reading "The curse of Labyrinth"

I`m glad to see all of you enjoyed, and dont forget to post your own story!

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zool hehehe  :give_rose: i enjoyed reading it alot nice story xD love the idea about lab gdluck in the competition  :clapping:

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u mean berengar or beranigma or beranger ;D ....anyway gud job :lol:


Got confused with these names alot when I wrote this haha.
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Got confused with these names alot when I wrote this haha.


well den dnt forget to apply de changes to to it(Berengar) ::)
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I`ll be changing this story again soon. I`ll post the original full story at tavern for those who loved reading my story.


And yes the great Oko-shaar died, will he be brought back to live? Stay tuned for part 2 of: The curse of Labyrinth!

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i get the answer !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Okoshaar will resp in 10 min so he will be back :rofl:


There is no such thing as "Respawning"


Have I really killed him or not? :blush:

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necromancer near okoshar will rise him.

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Still trying to get inspiration for writing more ^^ Getting alot awesome reactions from you guys wich i'm gratefull for, Thnx all. I won't let you down! :drinks:

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I`m still in shock lmao xD Thanks everyone for reading The curse of Labyrinth! I`m working on part 2 atm, gonna add some new features to it!

Stay tuned for Redemption! :drinks:

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